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Manifest
post Mar 30 2004, 05:13 PM
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tell 'em I have no clue how some people can fuck up something as beautiful as poetry


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post Mar 31 2004, 07:20 PM
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QUOTE (cosmic @ Mar 29 2004, 05:41 PM)
Being free to post comments on poems does not mean posting BS for the sake of posting BS. People are sharing their artistic talent, there isn't such a thing as a bad comment in personal expression, at least here. SO DON'T DO IT. Let the person be free to put whatever they'd like without the apphrension of disrespectfull members. If you don't like it don't comment.

Ok, I misunderstood it. Explain it to me like I'm an 8 year old, to let me understand it.

1. Do I post BS posts on the poems?
2. I have never given bad comment to a poem.
3. Go on, explain it to me.


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post Mar 31 2004, 09:56 PM
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^Explanation: he wasn't even referring to you...paranoid much? laugh.gif


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regilas
post Apr 2 2004, 01:49 PM
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ok, I feel so much better. laughing.gif


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post Dec 18 2004, 01:23 PM
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QUOTE(cosmic @ Mar 29 2004, 03:53 PM)
QUOTE(Poet @ Mar 29 2004, 04:51 PM)
did u mean 'is' and not 'isnt' ?

isn't


I added to the sentance.
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"Vampire"

A word of my pain and sufferring,
but it is not me;

To display my torment (that's why Poet posted that.)

To manifest my torment
To encourage my hatred,
but it is not me

"You are as wretched as christopher columbus
snd I sm not your entertainment."



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post Jan 27 2005, 12:08 PM
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QUOTE(Manifest @ Mar 31 2004, 01:13 AM)
tell 'em I have no clue how some people can fuck up something as beautiful as poetry
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wow, that really is one of the nicest thing's i've ever heard. you legend clap2.gif


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Lostphoenix
post Mar 8 2005, 05:59 AM
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so if you have metalists who use rap in their music, are they plagiators of the rappers?
i'm really disappointed that some here think this is intellectual contest and have to belittle people's art because they think they've been influenced. so if somebody mentiones sad eyes in a poem it means any other person who uses sad eyes steals somebody elses art. bullshit. i am sure you can turn to Zack and say that some of his lyrics sound like you've heard them before from any other freedom fighter. oh please.
if somebody uses bitch and speaks derogatory language whether its pointed at women or animals should i accuse them of being influenced by Wu-tang clan????i can count a lot of times they say bitch.... should a person who claims a poem full of word bitch be accused of plagiatorism, taking excertst etc. shit like that?
i would have thought Zack could have inspired some for respect for fellow human beings,but obviously not for some fans..


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ImperialAerosolK...
post Mar 8 2005, 04:51 PM
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i have to say one thing here


i take the ACLU stance for poetry content here. if someone writes a poem on this board the only issue i would have with it is that it have some sort of words and I've known to avoid those in essays too.


So.


cunt.
fag
bitch
nigger
kike


we've gotten so bored with them that they've lost their punch. they are hobby fodder for the insecure. myself included.


but with this said....

"Junkyard" is a killer poem...

sorry LP...i like language and rev79 has the right to Carlinize as much as he likes...


I applaud it.


But I stand behind the good nature of responses vs. a lame criticism or a dis.

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post Mar 8 2005, 07:23 PM
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whore


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post Mar 8 2005, 07:27 PM
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post Mar 8 2005, 09:24 PM
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QUOTE(ImperialAerosolKid @ Mar 8 2005, 07:51 PM)
"Junkyard" is a killer poem...
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Thanks. I appreciate that.


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Where we go from there is a choice I leave to you.


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post Mar 9 2005, 04:33 AM
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after your post i felt the need to add a curse


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post Mar 9 2005, 05:31 AM
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post Mar 11 2005, 04:59 AM
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i think rev shoud say thanks for promoting his poem while he dissed mine and thanks to him people aint got space to approciate mine.except thru the many pms i've had for which i say thanks guys.

but justice is on holiday on Mars, gone AWOL


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ImperialAerosolK...
post Mar 11 2005, 05:18 AM
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good lord it's hard to be wise sad.gif
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