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 Mar 30 2004, 05:13 PM
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 Hoochie Coochie Myne  Group: Activist Posts: 2,692 Joined: 30-November 02 From: Fontana, california Member No.: 8  |
tell 'em I have no clue how some people can fuck up something as beautiful as poetry
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Mar 31 2004, 07:20 PM
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 Writer Group: Activist Posts: 2,656 Joined: 10-October 03 From: Minnesota Member No.: 929 |
Ok, I misunderstood it. Explain it to me like I'm an 8 year old, to let me understand it. 1. Do I post BS posts on the poems? 2. I have never given bad comment to a poem. 3. Go on, explain it to me. -------------------- A world this evil should be black, blind, and deaf, and without any feelings at all. Then there won't be any color to be seen, no hatred to be heard, and no pain to be felt.
- Anne Moody. The simplest man or woman with passion will be more persuasive than the most eloquent without. - Descartes |
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Mar 31 2004, 09:56 PM
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 Nun Chuka Kata Group: Moderators Posts: 6,756 Joined: 29-April 03 From: On top of you Member No.: 412 |
^Explanation: he wasn't even referring to you...paranoid much?
-------------------- I know you're out there. I can feel you now. I know that you're afraid. You're afraid of us, you're afraid of change. I don't know the future. I didn't come here to tell you how this is going to end, I came here to tell you how this is going to begin. Now, I'm going to hang up this phone, and I'm going to show these people what you don't want them to see. I'm going to show them a world without you. A world without rules and controls, without borders or boundaries. A world...where anything is possible.
Where we go from there is a choice I leave to you. |
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Apr 2 2004, 01:49 PM
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Writer Group: Activist Posts: 2,656 Joined: 10-October 03 From: Minnesota Member No.: 929 |
ok, I feel so much better.
-------------------- A world this evil should be black, blind, and deaf, and without any feelings at all. Then there won't be any color to be seen, no hatred to be heard, and no pain to be felt.
- Anne Moody. The simplest man or woman with passion will be more persuasive than the most eloquent without. - Descartes |
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 Dec 18 2004, 01:23 PM
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Junior Activist Group: Activist Posts: 14 Joined: 17-December 04 Member No.: 3,055 |
QUOTE(cosmic @ Mar 29 2004, 03:53 PM) QUOTE(Poet @ Mar 29 2004, 04:51 PM) did u mean 'is' and not 'isnt' ? isn't I added to the sentance. [right][snapback]86268[/snapback][/right] "Vampire" A word of my pain and sufferring, but it is not me; To display my torment (that's why Poet posted that.) To manifest my torment To encourage my hatred, but it is not me "You are as wretched as christopher columbus snd I sm not your entertainment." -------------------- ~Juan de Falla
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Jan 27 2005, 12:08 PM
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 Activist Group: Activist Posts: 63 Joined: 12-January 05 From: uk Member No.: 3,104 |
QUOTE(Manifest @ Mar 31 2004, 01:13 AM) tell 'em I have no clue how some people can fuck up something as beautiful as poetry [right][snapback]86698[/snapback][/right] wow, that really is one of the nicest thing's i've ever heard. you legend 
-------------------- have you ever wondered what that smell is as you wander past a homeless person??? well, its probably the smell of your head up your arse.
You are not a slave NICE WORK BONE DADDY |
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Mar 8 2005, 05:59 AM
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soul rebel Group: Activist Posts: 3,037 Joined: 31-December 04 Member No.: 3,077 |
so if you have metalists who use rap in their music, are they plagiators of the rappers?
i'm really disappointed that some here think this is intellectual contest and have to belittle people's art because they think they've been influenced. so if somebody mentiones sad eyes in a poem it means any other person who uses sad eyes steals somebody elses art. bullshit. i am sure you can turn to Zack and say that some of his lyrics sound like you've heard them before from any other freedom fighter. oh please. if somebody uses bitch and speaks derogatory language whether its pointed at women or animals should i accuse them of being influenced by Wu-tang clan????i can count a lot of times they say bitch.... should a person who claims a poem full of word bitch be accused of plagiatorism, taking excertst etc. shit like that? i would have thought Zack could have inspired some for respect for fellow human beings,but obviously not for some fans.. -------------------- Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocrities. The latter cannot understand it when a man does not thoughtlessly submit to hereditary prejudices but honestly and courageously uses his intelligence.
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Mar 8 2005, 04:51 PM
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 Freedom Advocate Group: Activist Posts: 5,060 Joined: 21-June 03 From: Vermont Member No.: 483 |
i have to say one thing here
i take the ACLU stance for poetry content here. if someone writes a poem on this board the only issue i would have with it is that it have some sort of words and I've known to avoid those in essays too. So. cunt. fag bitch nigger kike we've gotten so bored with them that they've lost their punch. they are hobby fodder for the insecure. myself included. but with this said.... "Junkyard" is a killer poem... sorry LP...i like language and rev79 has the right to Carlinize as much as he likes... I applaud it. But I stand behind the good nature of responses vs. a lame criticism or a dis. |
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Mar 8 2005, 07:23 PM
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 The guy you cant remember to forget Group: Activist Posts: 313 Joined: 24-January 03 From: PA, USA Member No.: 180 |
whore
-------------------- Children molded since birth
Schools teaching the revised Books printing Sams truth History shaped in clay |
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Mar 8 2005, 07:27 PM
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Freedom Advocate Group: Activist Posts: 5,060 Joined: 21-June 03 From: Vermont Member No.: 483 |
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Mar 8 2005, 09:24 PM
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Nun Chuka Kata Group: Moderators Posts: 6,756 Joined: 29-April 03 From: On top of you Member No.: 412 |
QUOTE(ImperialAerosolKid @ Mar 8 2005, 07:51 PM) "Junkyard" is a killer poem... [right][snapback]161612[/snapback][/right] Thanks. I appreciate that. -------------------- I know you're out there. I can feel you now. I know that you're afraid. You're afraid of us, you're afraid of change. I don't know the future. I didn't come here to tell you how this is going to end, I came here to tell you how this is going to begin. Now, I'm going to hang up this phone, and I'm going to show these people what you don't want them to see. I'm going to show them a world without you. A world without rules and controls, without borders or boundaries. A world...where anything is possible.
Where we go from there is a choice I leave to you. |
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Mar 9 2005, 04:33 AM
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The guy you cant remember to forget Group: Activist Posts: 313 Joined: 24-January 03 From: PA, USA Member No.: 180 |
after your post i felt the need to add a curse
-------------------- Children molded since birth
Schools teaching the revised Books printing Sams truth History shaped in clay |
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Mar 9 2005, 05:31 AM
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Freedom Advocate Group: Activist Posts: 5,060 Joined: 21-June 03 From: Vermont Member No.: 483 |
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Mar 11 2005, 04:59 AM
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soul rebel Group: Activist Posts: 3,037 Joined: 31-December 04 Member No.: 3,077 |
i think rev shoud say thanks for promoting his poem while he dissed mine and thanks to him people aint got space to approciate mine.except thru the many pms i've had for which i say thanks guys.
but justice is on holiday on Mars, gone AWOL -------------------- Great spirits have always found violent opposition from mediocrities. The latter cannot understand it when a man does not thoughtlessly submit to hereditary prejudices but honestly and courageously uses his intelligence.
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Mar 11 2005, 05:18 AM
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Freedom Advocate Group: Activist Posts: 5,060 Joined: 21-June 03 From: Vermont Member No.: 483 |
good lord it's hard to be wise
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