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 Jul 31 2003, 09:06 AM
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 Activist  Group: Activist Posts: 82 Joined: 21-July 03 From: Seattle WA Member No.: 538  |
"six years of my life" (ode to a marriage gone wrong)
Hollow dreams, a sweaty gleam the shadows plot your voices scheme I remember well your names each and every incantation each little emasculation and the lies you tried to paint as truth This post has been edited by Gunman2112: Jul 31 2003, 09:11 AM -------------------- All governments suffer a recurring problem: Power attracts pathological personalities. It is not that power corrupts but that it is magnetic to the corruptible. Such people have a tendency to become drunk on violence, a condition to which they are quickly addicted.
--Missionaria Protectiva, Text QIV (decto) --From Frank Herbet's Dune |
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Jul 31 2003, 09:09 AM
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 Freedom Advocate Group: Activist Posts: 5,060 Joined: 21-June 03 From: Vermont Member No.: 483 |
that's great. nice rhythms.
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Jul 31 2003, 09:28 AM
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 "Welcome to Neotokyo" Group: Activist Posts: 323 Joined: 19-July 03 Member No.: 534 |
You have the drive to write some good ones man. Keep it up.
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