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Jingle
post Jan 14 2009, 04:06 PM
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I threw out my computer
in o five
and didn't expect to
comb my hair ever again
but goddamn Cheryl Crow
had me pegged all along-
like my leg that taps
every other step
and keeps track of my
daily dissonance.
Or even my hands-
I wish they would but
thimbles don't fit
on my fingers anymore
and I haven't
plopped onto a swing set's
swing and swung
since Labor Day-
at least Phish will be
swinging by....
like a Louisville Slugger
at sundown
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post Jan 27 2009, 01:02 PM
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U cant rhyme
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post Jan 27 2009, 01:31 PM
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QUOTE (Tearz4Fearz @ Jan 27 2009, 01:02 PM) *
U cant rhyme

YOU ARE SO IGNORANT! It's not like all poetry is SUPPOSED to rhyme! What an ass!


Jingle...I thought it was well written, I liked it a lot. I'd like to hear it read. Of course that won't be happening. Hahaha. Props though!
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Fremen Bryan
post Jan 27 2009, 08:00 PM
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QUOTE (Tearz4Fearz @ Jan 27 2009, 01:02 PM) *
U cant rhyme


Jingle's poetry is far better than any of the literary trash you have put up.

Really Tearz4Fearz / Lovie / Private I / Mochachino - I dont think anybodies poetry is as weak and meaningless as your drivel.

Your really not one to speak out.


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DTA
post Jan 27 2009, 10:30 PM
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QUOTE (Tearz4Fearz @ Jan 27 2009, 01:02 PM) *
U cant rhyme


stop being a bitch.


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post Feb 6 2009, 07:04 AM
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Bryan exists to harrass and badger innocent people . . you are a freak show, you have no life, get over yourself (psychotic and neurotic).
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Fremen Bryan
post Feb 6 2009, 07:12 PM
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Why would Tearz4Fearz post to a forum for ZDLR fans when she said that she 'wishes he would die'?/!


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Jingle
post Feb 6 2009, 07:21 PM
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Please, do not post this nonsense on my threads.

We cannot get anywhere or make change unless we can stop fighting with each other. And if we're going to waste ourselves fighting then it should be at least over something that matters.

I'm sick of all this negativity. There is enough darkness in this world. No more, please.
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