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worldchaos
post Aug 27 2003, 10:48 AM
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No one saw it; but I did.
Clear as day, just not back then.
When I look back now,
I realize what made you laugh and smile...
you had an angel inside that tickeled your sides.
She played inside of you and made your hair shine
She tickeled your feet when you felt shy
She gave you strength when nothing else did.

She told you one day that you were going to die
and that you couldn't tell anyone; not even me.

If you did, you would suffer for the rest of your life
and she would never play with you again.
I now know, that day you died, you cried inside
more than I could ever try.
The pain that you must have felt
when you knew it was coming, but you couldn't let me know.
You spent all day with me, holding it in
looking in my eyes, waiting to burst.
But you held strong and listened to that angel...
That fucking angel that made you smile
and made you laugh
and made you the most beautiful woman I have ever seen.

That fucking angel, took you away, the most selfish way...
for some reason, I will never understand.

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post Aug 29 2003, 10:48 AM
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Wow....that was...that was pretty powerful man cry.gif

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post Aug 29 2003, 11:35 AM
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post Aug 29 2003, 11:36 AM
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Thanks guys.


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post Sep 14 2003, 08:04 PM
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That happened to me today! Nice timing world chaos.. cosmic! (told me to come here) cry.gif


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"it's always nice to help friends laugh the snot from their nose!"

.. and of course: fucking the heart break brigade until one truely learns to find the antichrist of one's own soul

no ones ever wanted to pay me shit.... oh yea they figure if i'm making money i should tell them all how because if i'm making money anyone should be able to do it... but otherwise if i go to them for opportunities.. they'd prefer i kiss their ass for nothing... or if i'm lucky i get to suck their dick!

these documents have been unsealed until 2069 in order to provide faith in fucking nothing dipshits
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post Sep 14 2003, 08:20 PM
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QUOTE (rampage @ Sep 15 2003, 04:04 AM)
That happened to me today! Nice timing world chaos.. cosmic! (told me to come here) cry.gif

What happened to you rampage?


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post Sep 14 2003, 08:58 PM
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Your poem happened to me today. You know sometimes you pick up a poem and it really connects because its right there with ya! She died with a smile on her face after the angels came and took her away.


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"it's always nice to help friends laugh the snot from their nose!"

.. and of course: fucking the heart break brigade until one truely learns to find the antichrist of one's own soul

no ones ever wanted to pay me shit.... oh yea they figure if i'm making money i should tell them all how because if i'm making money anyone should be able to do it... but otherwise if i go to them for opportunities.. they'd prefer i kiss their ass for nothing... or if i'm lucky i get to suck their dick!

these documents have been unsealed until 2069 in order to provide faith in fucking nothing dipshits
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post Sep 14 2003, 10:14 PM
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QUOTE (rampage @ Sep 15 2003, 04:58 AM)
Your poem happened to me today. You know sometimes you pick up a poem and it really connects because its right there with ya! She died with a smile on her face after the angels came and took her away.

Someone you knew died today? If So sorry to hear about that man. I coulnd't quite depict what you meant in your first response since you had a smilie face in your subject. Sorry for the misunderstanding.


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post Sep 14 2003, 10:28 PM
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That was her smiling dead face.


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"it's always nice to help friends laugh the snot from their nose!"

.. and of course: fucking the heart break brigade until one truely learns to find the antichrist of one's own soul

no ones ever wanted to pay me shit.... oh yea they figure if i'm making money i should tell them all how because if i'm making money anyone should be able to do it... but otherwise if i go to them for opportunities.. they'd prefer i kiss their ass for nothing... or if i'm lucky i get to suck their dick!

these documents have been unsealed until 2069 in order to provide faith in fucking nothing dipshits
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post Sep 15 2003, 04:33 PM
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QUOTE (rampage @ Sep 15 2003, 06:28 AM)
That was her smiling dead face.

wtf, that is weird man. My experience to write this poem is nothing close to what yours is sounding like.


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worldchaos
post Oct 6 2003, 08:01 AM
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QUOTE (rampage @ Sep 15 2003, 06:28 AM)
That was her smiling dead face.

hey man, I don't think you have answered my question... How did this "happen" to you?


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post Oct 7 2003, 01:31 PM
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